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[[User:Andrew Geraghty-Bank of Canada|Andrew]] 20:50, 1 May 2008 (BST) Better - I was thinking of running some of this by our speech writers. They have a gift for simplicity of language. I don't think its as a whole as straight forward as we need it to be. What do you think?
 
[[User:Andrew Geraghty-Bank of Canada|Andrew]] 20:50, 1 May 2008 (BST) Better - I was thinking of running some of this by our speech writers. They have a gift for simplicity of language. I don't think its as a whole as straight forward as we need it to be. What do you think?
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[[User:Christine Sommo-FRBNY|Christine Sommo-FRBNY]] 13:49, 2 May 2008 (BST) Absolutely.  Feel free to edit as you see fit.

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The History Section - IMHO - this section is not written with a neutral point of view (NPOV) It reads like a bit of an advertisement/promotion and therefore may be against breaks wikipedia policy See ==> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Andrew' ]

Christine Sommo-FRBNY 19:04, 1 May 2008 (BST) Okay Andrew, I edited the History section a bit based on your comments. What say you now?

Andrew 20:50, 1 May 2008 (BST) Better - I was thinking of running some of this by our speech writers. They have a gift for simplicity of language. I don't think its as a whole as straight forward as we need it to be. What do you think?

Christine Sommo-FRBNY 13:49, 2 May 2008 (BST) Absolutely. Feel free to edit as you see fit.